so yeah discuss what you think about it

I think it is good.Sorry about my crapy chapters though.

thanks but you really need to work on your grammar and spelling, like you said"calaps" when it should be "collapse"

Yes I know.But for some reason in school I am pretty decent...

hm cool so your a monk i take it?

Yeah.Ya see there is this show called Avatar the legend of Aang about a monk you has to save the world using the four elements.

Could do with a slightly more inspired name. But apart from that, it looks alright.

i tried changing it but it wont let me

I'll change it for you, what d'you want it to be called?

The Chapters of War

Fix'd. :)

thanks you very Much evil hamster

I watch that... It's cool...

So far, it's off to a good start. Probably won't go as far as EotD. No offense!

I disagree Blaze.

I dont like naruto or most manga, i dont know why but its just me

Anyway i just came up with this as a spur of the moment sorta thing

I was only having a mess.

The stupid pr......uh...mean pepeol at nickelodeon cut it when it got good :( ( X-( )

i think its goin quite well now

When are you doing the next chapter or are you waiting for blaze?

Why don't you write one Mark?

Whats Aero?

wind magic and Cilster you just became the second most important person in my roleplay

Um, yeah, I realize that, but Isn't Mary second?...

Gone away for nine days so I won't be posting unless I find a internet café.(I poosted hat so that you knew I wasn't just bored with it)

Dont tell me its dead all ready :|

i always say that a good roleplay needs 2 main people in it, everyone else will join in later. sort of like extras.

blaze is right, assuming it isn't dead now, chapters of war won't live as long. sorry josh, i just don't see it is all.

soz wrong post :S

I'll still post, and I'm presuming Josh and Mark will?

I think it is pretty much over...

Will you post Mark? And will Josh? Thats about the same ammount of people in EoTD.

im gonna keep posting it is my roleplay after all :p

And I am too so maybe it won't die down.

Made new chapter ;)

erm Mark its Lichtwell and thats an entire country o_0 its all destroyed?

Whoa... Thats a lot.

i dont get what you meen blaze :/

You said, it's all destroyed. A whole country.
Thats whaty I meant.

Umm was I too late making a character then?

no not at all :) welcome to The chapters my friend :D

Okay, about to write now.

Oh god, this is back. Oh well. I don't mind.

BUT, for future referance, soliloqueds (not sure how to spell either) are only used in plays.